Sonntag, 21. November 2010

My diary entry about the first ghost

Hey diary,
After Marley went out of the window, I locked the window, that he couldn´t come in and very quickly I fell asleep.
When I woke up again, amazingly it was dark. As every morning I waited for the bells to tell me what time it was, but they didn´t chime 6, 7, 8 or 9 times. No, they chimed 12 times. I really had slept a whole day. I remembered that, as Marley´s ghost had told me, at 1 o´clock the first ghost should visit. While waiting I became more and more frightened. When the bells rang one time the curtains of my bed moved and I could see somebody, who had white hair, strong arms, legs and hands. A light flashed up in my room and in fact it was the ghost. He took my hand and we went through the wall and stood upon an open country road. Directly I couldn´t see the city anymore and I recognised a familiar scenery. It was the sorrounding where I had grown up. All the streets, trees and people I knew. The boys were shouting to each other and you could hear merry music in the air.   
(180 words)                  

7 Kommentare:

  1. Well done. Nici!
    I like the looking of your blog! :)
    maaike and josie

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  2. Hey nici
    i also like the layout of your blog
    these layout makes a nice X-mas feeling !
    well done
    toni

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  3. I like your layout, too (:
    I can understand your text very good.
    Good job ;)

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  4. I like the candle in the background and the layout of the records. Well done. You did a graet job of doing your blog.
    Magnus

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  5. I like your design too, but I think Arial would be more convenient to read.

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  6. Hey Nici
    Well done :)
    Nice desinged, and I like too read your blog, it's great.

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  7. to Linda´s comment:
    I have changed it into a font, which is better to read.
    thanks for you´re comment :)

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